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Sentence Source Variation -- 4/17/14 Lab

1) According to Mayuree Rao, graduate of The Warren Alpert Medical School of Brown University, "the highest category of healthier diets cost $1.48/day ($1.01 to $1.95) more than the lowest category."

2) Discussing the price differences of a healthy lifestyle opposed to various dieting techniques, author Mayuree Rao claims that "the highest category of healthier diets cost $1.48/day ($1.01 to $1.95) more than the lowest category."

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1) In early December of 2013, the Harvard School of Public Health researched the cost efficiency of eating healthy opposed to unhealthy dieting. "The healthiest diets cost about $1.50 more per day..." (HSPH). According to Mayuree Rao, lead author of this research investigation, "'People often say that healthier foods are more expensive, and that such costs strongly limit better diet habits...'" 

2) Kathleen M. Zelman, director of nutrition for WebMD.com, comes into contact with any and all of the website's diet, nutrition, and food information articles. In her WebMD Feature, "Dieting Is Out; Healthy Eating Is In," we get a look at what people of today's day & age are in pursuit of to achieve an overall healthier lifestyle. "...a 2008 American Diabetic Association survey of nearly 800 adults found that...73% said [they aren't doing more to improve their diets] because they don't want to give up their favorite foods." However, through Zelman's research, ADA spokesperson Jeannie Gazzaniga Moloo claims that "all food can fit into a healthy diet, as long as you exercise and practice moderation."